(1)There is public discussion nowadays as to the topic of whether universities shall ac-cept equal numbers of male and female students in each subject.
(2)This becomes a heateddiscussion.
(3)What's more, either male or female gender has its bad habits.
(4)Female studentsalways get together and gossip about others' secrets.
(5)They usually have a quarrel witheach other just because of some boring things.
(6)We may cite a common example of thefamous America TV series 《Gossip Girl》.
(7)Two best friends Blair and Serena had aquarrel for who is the stunning star in the school.
(8)Well, as well as we all known, with moremale students than female students, male students will often come to blow with each otherjust for the same pretty girl they love.
(9)Furthermore, the fight will happen less if there areequal numbers of male and female students in each subject.
(10)On the other hand, there are various aspects against these arguments.
(11)Malestudents have a gift in science and technology while female students are good at music, artand psychology.
(12)The human nature cannot be acquired from others.
(13)Our society isfilled with the examples of great male scientists and famous female art masters.
(14)From what has been discussed above, we may come to the conclusion that it morebenefits to universities about receiving equal numbers of male and female followers in everysubject for it can bring us a cordial and harmonious atmosphere for our campus life.
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——米米(写作7.5分)
邓老师强化训练的方式帮了我不少,上课的时候,他让我读一遍题,然后迅速地发散思维想出几个支持自己观点的理由和例子。一开始是比较有难度的,想出的理由也是漏洞百出\很多重复,但是他帮我分析了十几个题后,我也就慢慢上道了。
——飞雪飘零(写作6.5分)
思路的拓展和语言的多变、地道是邓老师带我重点突破的地方。我觉得邓老师采用的这种方法,并非是让我背模板的应试方法,而是让我的写作水平真正有了提高,不仅雅思写作考试取得了不错的成绩,而且对我后期大四的学习和考试也有一定的帮助。我相信这样的积累,对出国后研究生学习中的写作也打下了较好的基础。
——阿藤(写作6.5分)